第五节人生道理提炼型
13. 此生我不可以替代
directions:
write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay, you should
1. describe the drawing briefly,
2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
3. give your comments.
you should write neatly on the answer sheet.
审题及提纲图像内容看似简略,但涵义深远。长颈鹿仰
仗自个的身高优势,讪笑绵羊吃不到树上部的叶子。绵羊则使用自个身段低矮的优势予以反击,指出长颈鹿吃不到栏杆外的草。显着,两只动物的对话提示了图像的主题:每自个都有自个的一起之处,可是以己之长攻别人所短是不可以取的。鉴于两只动物的言语具有彼此关于性,切莫将图像主题解读为兄弟之间的共处之道等内容,构成偏题。
第一段:描绘图像。图中最要害的信息是长颈鹿与绵羊的对话,考生在描绘图像内容时,千万不能舍本求末,关于太阳、鸟等不必要的信息应决断扔掉。
第二段:提示涵义,充分延展。首要害明图像所包含的深意,接着可联络实际情况证明自个的观念,最终经过举例进一步阐明。
第三段:总结谈论。重申主题,并进一步论说怎样才算是绝无仅有的人,以引发读者的思考。
经典模板范文inside the fence, a giraffe proudly tells a sheep that he can eat the leaves at the top of the tree while the sheep cannot. nevertheless, the sheep, not to be outdone, claims that he is able to get through the hole in the fence and eat the grass outside while the giraffe cannot.
the real life makes us realize that even with our faults—and there are seemingly many—we are unique and irreplaceable. people should not tilt at others shortcomings with their strong points, but rather concentrate on their own life journeys to secure a wonderful life. based on this, every person plays a different and unique role within his or her community and in the society as a whole. apart from the skills they bring to that role, they also bring their personalities and god-given gifts that are uniquely their own. for instance, there is no substitute for every single employee because they not only carry deep institutional culture of the company, but also influence their colleagues with their own personalities.
you are not replaceable, no matter what others say or what you may think. however, you should bear in mind: only those who integrate knowledge, innovation and strategy as a whole are unique and irreplaceable, while those who are sated with food and remain idle will fall behind the development of the times one day.
在栅门内,一只长颈鹿骄傲地告诉一只绵羊自个能吃到树上部的叶子,而绵羊不能。可是,绵羊也不甘示弱,声称他能穿过栅门的缺口去吃外面的草,而长颈鹿却不可。
实际日子告诉咱们,尽管咱们有缺陷——如同还许多——可是,每自个都有自个的一起之处,且无法被替代。我们不大约以己之长攻别人所短,而大约专心于自个的日子轨迹去获得精彩人生。根据此,每自个都在各自的圈子和整个社会中扮演着不一样且仅有的人物。除了具有赋予该人物的技能外,每自个还具有本身特有的自个特质以及天资。比方,每一个职工都是不可以替代的,因为他们不只承载了厚重的公司准则文明,而且还以自个特质影响着周围的火伴。
不管别人说啥,或许你自个怎么想,你都是不可以替代的。但一起需谨记,只需集常识、立异和策略于一身的人才是一起且不可以替代的。而那些饱食整天且无所事事的人终有一天会被年代选择。
靓词靓语bear in mind 紧记
not to be outdone 不甘示弱
sate v.充分满足
tilt v.冲击;(使)倾斜
unique a.一起的;仅有的
irreplaceable a.不能替代的
secure v.获得;使平安
substitute n.替代者;替代物
institutional a.准则的;机构的
integrate v.使一体化,使成全体
靓句分析①the real life makes us realize that even with our faults—and there are seemingly many—we are unique and irreplaceable.
本句用于提示文章主题——“每自个都是不可以替代的”,为下文的有关论说埋下伏笔。句中,作者先以“that”引出“even with our faults…”一句,作“realize”的宾语;宾语从句中,又以破折号引出“and there are seemingly many”一句,作刺进语,弥补阐明“our faults”。整个语句参差有致,主次清楚。
②people should not tilt at others shortcomings with their strong points, but rather concentrate on their own life journeys to secure a wonderful life.
本句在文中起承上启下的作用。正因为上一句道出了“we are unique and irreplaceable”,本句紧随这今后,将语义顺延至“concentrate on their own life journeys”这一论题,然后为下文“every person plays a different and unique role…”做好了逻辑烘托。句中“not…but rather…”意为“不是……而是……”。“but”联接语句的并排谓宾,两有些规划对称,语义相对。这是考研作文中的常用句式,考生应熟练掌控。
③…only those who integrate knowledge, innovation and strategy as a whole are unique and irreplaceable, while those who are sated with food and remain idle will fall behind the development of the times one day.
继全文偏重论说“每自个都是不可以替代的”这一观念之后,作者以本句收尾,不只提出变成一起之人需具有的条件,且从不和论说了变成不可以替代之人的重要性。短短一句话丰厚了论说的视点,深化了文章的主题,为全文满足收尾。句中,作者以“while”联接两个并排分句,在语义上标明两者的比照联络。两个“those who…”句式的运用使语句规整秀丽。
源自《写作160篇》
关于19备考的宝宝来讲,如今起可以参阅以下温习方案(书本材料关于英语基础单薄的考生哦~~)
2021.11-2021.1断定考研方向,选择考研温习材料。
1.其实不主张你从如今就初步背单词做题,因为仍是要先选好方向,然后你的尽力才是有意义的,主张先晓得下考研英语的大约情况(题型、分值等)。
2.还没断定考研方向的话,可以趁如今晓得各大院校和各专业的研讨生招生情况和作业情况。不要打没有预备的仗。
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